The poems in Mercy
contain incredible range, but range is the wrong word. They explore and expand
on a plethora of topics, but the poems do not seek to contain the subject
matter. Instead, I see a building of ideas, of what mercy may or may one day
mean. The poems do not arrive at a conclusion,
or any sort of finality; they do end, but they also seem to continue somewhere
off the page. And I cannot help but think of these poems as an unending gesture toward mercy.
As a book Mercy
leaves us with a sense of expansion and enormity. We, like the speaker, are
left grasping for understanding and yes, for mercy too. I see this expansion in much of Clifton’s
work in the collection, but the endless reaching in “Wind on The St. Mary’s
River” is particularly striking.
it is the
elders trying to return
sensing
that the coast is near and they
will soon be home again
they have walked under two oceans
and to many seas
the nap of their silver hair
whipping
as the wind sings out to them
this way this way
and they come rising steadily not
swimming exactly toward shore
toward redemption
but the wind dies down
and they sigh and still and descend
while we watch from our porches
not remembering their names
not calling out
Jeremiah Fanny Lou Geronimo
but only
white caps on the water look white caps
In contrast to the first two stanzas that establish the idea
of crossing numbered bodies of water the last two stanza’s and the final line
push the poem in to a place of expansion. In the last two stanzas the elders become
linked with the water and wind. They have become part of elemental bodies. Rather
than a singular journey the crossing, like many of Clifton’s poems, has become
endless and beyond the scope of a single life.
There is no ending, but a sense that like the rhythm and cycle of waves the
elders will always be moving toward shore. And that the “we” in the poem will always
be watching and reaching. It is this same expansive push in the poem where the
concept of not remembering becomes linked to remembering. The names have been
remembered on the page, but without context and between spaces. Here again, there
is a reaching in between memory and loss into expansiveness. The last line signals
the end of the text, but not the poem—not the complexity of what has been lost.
Instead, the expectation of redemption and the transformation of reaching as a
gesture becomes an endless space just as it does in the final lines of the book from
“Message From The Old Ones:”
there is a star
more distant
than Eden
something there
is even now
preparing
Mercy moves in cycles
from death to forgiveness and anger to hope and life then around again. It
plunges into vast concepts, memories and contradictions without remorse or over
explanation. The poems embody and endless gesture toward mercy that is never
perfect or complete, but unyielding in the expansiveness of the search.
"Mercy moves in cycles from death to forgiveness and anger to hope and life then around again... The poems embody and endless gesture toward mercy that is never perfect or complete, but unyielding in the expansiveness of the search."
ReplyDeleteYour exploration of mercy itself is fascinating, not only the elusiveness of mercy in its entirety but also the way these poems depict mercy as a representation of the cycles of life. The concept of reaching feels accurate, for memories of the past or loved ones, forgiveness, hope--all are reaching for some emotion that is inherent in the human psyche as the need for mercy.
Nice from both of you. She does have a complexity, some driving pluralities that fuse and separate like the bodies of water you refer to in this. She doesn't blame though. huh?
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