Reading
Etheridge Knight feels like reading a journal, his most personal emotions
spelled out in the form of poetry. It’s so charged with emotion that it reads
almost as a stream of consciousness, an uncensored version of personal poetry
rather than something expected in a poetry anthology. His poem Feeling Fucked
Up is relatable in the sense that it feels like something I could see myself
writing in a poetry journal, a typical lost love poem that becomes unique under
his linguistic choice. Knight’s imagery is stark as the “bright white bone” and
“crystal sand” he uses to contrast his lovers “softness and midnight sighs.”
Though his poetry reads as pure emotion, it comes charged with literary
techniques that convey the emotion with enough power to make the poems
memorable in their relatability.
Knight’s
work is laden with imagery, and one of the most memorable images in his work is
bone. Similar to Feeling Fucked Up’s “bright white bone”, For Malcom, A Year
After describes “dead white and dry bone bare” and The Bones of My Father describes
dreaming “of the dry bones of my father.” He also uses copious metaphors in
reference to night and day, light and dark, and these—coupled with the bones
imagery—create a common repeating image in the book that works like a skeleton
to support the remainder of the work.
Knight’s
poetry feels like an intimate experience in which he strips away his exterior
to reveal normally guarded emotions. The idea of bone, stark white bone,
suggests the body has been stripped away to reveal the inner skeleton. It is
the ultimate form of revealing oneself, to reveal one’s very bones. Similarly
his imagery of light and dark, “the night” and the “magic sun” create
juxtaposing revelation and concealment. Thus Knight alludes to the universal
struggle between revealing oneself fully and hiding within the prison cells and
social structures that have become the norm—not to mention hiding one’s true
self within the container of the body.
The use of bones reminds me of the feeling half dead that comes up in the blues all the time. he is obsessed with light and dark, and you are dead on in paralleling it to what is revealed and what is hidden
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i really like what you said about the contrasting aspects of concealment and revelation that happen in his poems, and the way that correlates to what he is constantly choosing to reveal and hold inside himself. there is definitely both an aura of claustrophobia and containment in his poems as well as an aspect of breaking open and busting out. and, yes, to what you said about the recurring presence of bones.
ReplyDeleteI really like the points you make at the very end, about Knight's revealing of himself through the stripping of his skin. It's tough to expose oneself in any sense and Knight doesn't hold back from exposing himself whatsoever. Very good analysis!
ReplyDeleteI really like the points you make at the very end, about Knight's revealing of himself through the stripping of his skin. It's tough to expose oneself in any sense and Knight doesn't hold back from exposing himself whatsoever. Very good analysis!
ReplyDeleteI really like the points you make at the very end, about Knight's revealing of himself through the stripping of his skin. It's tough to expose oneself in any sense and Knight doesn't hold back from exposing himself whatsoever. Very good analysis!
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