i'm going to make a stretch now.
i think wanda coleman's "for women who cruise the night" is really interesting because driving (and cars in general) as a leisure activity/pleasure activity is so gendered. it took me awhile to realize what it was about this poem that stood out or struck me, but i think it has to do with the fact that we see so many examples in pop culture of men on the open road, men enjoying driving, men driving to escape problems/to blow off steam/to be alone, etc. men are allowed the indulgence of driving and the solitude it brings. the act of driving for women isn't as symbolic or extraordinary. women drive to pick up their kids from school, to go grocery shopping, etc. what we also get is that women don't know how to drive or maneuver cars. and then there's all the weird sexualization of cars in advertising, men giving "sexy" cars female pronouns, calling them "baby," etc. and also cars as sites of danger for women (in the form of men cruising women, verbally harassing women from cars, etc). cars can definitely be used to wield power and communicate status.
so, in this poem, women are accessing that leisure, agency, and independence. especially because she's acknowledging women who cruise at night. women are expected to protect themselves from danger by staying in, avoiding being out late or at night, due to the reality of sexual violence, harassment, and assault... women are often chastised for being out late, and held responsible for harassment or violence against them if they haven't taken the precaution to stay in. coleman is applauding women who take back the night, who are self-determined, strong ("bared and daring"). but obviously, there's also sadness here, because the woman/women in this poem are "wary and slit-eyed" and driving to escape years that "screech and scream" as they're left behind and "bad plumbing." so, there's a class element there, too.
the car is a place that allows you to transport yourself physically and emotionally away from certain realities, for a time.
also Terry Wolverton is a feminist lesbian poet and activist whose work explores identity and place.
so there's definitely some element of questioning power and sexism and carving out space for women.
and after writing all this and looking up some of Wolverton's poems, i found her "Poem to the Detroit River" (http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/237610) which is about the brutal beating of a woman who was dragged from her car by a man who was enraged after she sideswiped his car on a bridge. a bunch of witnesses were around but did nothing and while he was attacking her and cursing at her/threatening to kill her, she wound up jumping off the bridge to her death. i'm not quite sure, in terms of content, if there's a clear connection between this poem and Coleman's poem, but it could feed into the 'taking back' of the car and night i mentioned.
Welcome to the Poets of Color of the Twentieth and Twenty-first Centuries A small sampling of poetry by poets of color are examined in this class as a way of expanding our perception of the American poetry cannon. Our discussions investigate the new forms, open languages, and cultural origins of the works, and also how these poets intersect with the literary terrain.
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• Asian American Poetry: the Next Generation edited by Victoria Chang
• Voices from Leimert Park, ed by Shonda, Buchannan
• Effigies, An Anthology of New Indigenous Writing Pacific Rim, 2009, Okpik, Rexford McDougall, etc (Salt Publishing)
• The Wind Shifts, New Latino Poetry, Edited by Francisco Aragón
• The Essential Etheridge Knight by Etheridge Knight
• Mercy by Lucille Clifton
• Zodiac of Echoes by Khaled Mattawa
• Diwata by Barbara Jane Reyes
Great analysis and theory Rex!
ReplyDeleteYour stretch seems about right to me. Coleman's poem made me research Terry Wolverton as well. I was hoping to find a connection. I'm thinking Coleman may have taken a writing workshop with Terry or read the poem at the link you posted and ...."after Terry Wolverton" in the title refers to her admiration for the writer possibly like the line "inky ribbons of love."
-Venus
Hmmm...u have me thinking about this. You took it to an entirely different place from where I went. I love that u relate it to the gendered experience of driving. I have never thought about that, and I'm not sure I fully subscribe to it...but I really admire such thorough analysis on this. I definitely want to talk about this in class on Tuesday.
ReplyDeletethanks for your reading, rex. the entry point in on cars is a great one, and helped me narrow down my sense that this certainly a commentary on gender and violence, but also a reclamation of motion even while that reclamation contains sadness and exhaustion. and whether or not the story of the detroit river was an influence to this poem, it works. the poem seemed to reference so many stories that we hear like that, bring them all to the forefront and provide a fast motion through them.
ReplyDeleteas I read I kept thinking about simultaneous thematic gesture towards sex workers. women who cruise the night, as a flip of women who walk the night and the johns who cruise for them. as a kind of defense of the work they do, the violence they often experience in silence, and voice of empowerment for those who are so often written off. i wonder what you think about that connection to cars?
im going to leave this for class since Chanel's in charge
ReplyDeleteI like all of your comments Tessa,rex, and Venus. The discussion on this poem with be fascinating. The varied readings seem to speak to the strength of the poem as it resonates in so many ways. Yes, I have my own reading, but I agree that it is an empowering piece. I made my poem map on it and I can't wait for class.
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